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The Best Job in the World
Author: Rocky
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(Added on Jul 5, 2007)
(This month 66253 readers) (Total 85367 readers) |
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The story of a Parole Officer, and why he loves his job. Note of caution: The racial slurs used in this story are for effect, and in no way reflect my personal beliefs or practices. If you don't have anything constructive to say about this piece of fiction, don't bother leaving your comments. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8/10) |
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Rating: (6/10) |
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Reviewer:
ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Jun 24, 2011 |
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What the hell is a Jinigga?! OH my goodness GROW a pair. I don't really like niggers, but the story is ok, readable. Also, and this is for the author, if you think you want to blackmail, rape and tortore women, you make goddamn sure that those women are the same color as you are. People might get offended when you rape a woman of different shade from you. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 10, 2008 |
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i am torn on this, on one hand th story was great, but despite your remarks in your storyline i still had a hard time with the racist language (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Feb 25, 2008)
- I understand the criticism, but felt that the language was necessary to "set the tone" for the story line. My apologies if you were offended...and my thanks for the high rating.
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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A good story, with some real "trigger words" for the victims to fuss over. I'd like to hear a little from the women in the story; perhaps some inner feelings and such, but even without it is a good tale. Here's hoping there might be more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- The tale was meant as nothing more than a short story, however, your suggestion is intriguing. I'm working on a couple of other projects right now, but will keep the idea of some follow-on tales in mind.
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Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- The tale was meant as nothing more than a short story, however, your suggestion is intriguing. I'm working on a couple of other projects right now, but will keep the idea of some follow-on tales in mind.
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Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- The tale was meant as nothing more than a short story, however, your suggestion is intriguing. I'm working on a couple of other projects right now, but will keep the idea of some follow-on tales in mind.
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Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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So, if you can't anything nice then don't say anything at all? LOL Your story is well done. It has a good pace to it and the violence is kept to a minimum while the humiliation is high! That is always a good story for me. And while I dislike the racist overtones, I do understand they are just being used as special effects. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2007)
- Thanks for the kind words. I'm pleased that you understood the reason I wrote it the way I did. I expect a few flames over it, but hope that others will understand as well.
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