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Ralf and Megan Pt. 1
Author: story.freak
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(Added on Jul 10, 2007)
(This month 49821 readers) (Total 57762 readers) |
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Sweet 18 year old Megan is blackmailed by her younger brother to things she never dreamed of. |
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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Very Interesting and promising start,
Eagerly looking forward to future segments.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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story.freak, your English is significantly better than many who post here for whom English is their mother tongue. Congrats on that. An English-speaking writing partner/editor could help you.
The story is interesting, but you should warn your readers by using the story codes, so they know what to expect.
I'm looking forwards to seeing where this goes from here. (7/10)
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