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Ax396
Author: cbtboyuk
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(Added on Jul 17, 2007)
(This month 65559 readers) (Total 83576 readers) |
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A senior Master prepares a stock boy for a training class at the Academy, the infamous gentleman's club and SM training facility in Cumbria, England, but finds more than he bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Nataku
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Jul 23, 2011 |
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I loved the visual descriptions in this story! Your way of describing the positions of the characters is superb. Jamie seemed very real and tantilizing; likewise, I was able to slip into the protagonist, he was passionate without being at all overdone. Fantastic! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nite Storm
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Nov 18, 2008 |
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For a first story very well writen! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hh6
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Jul 28, 2007 |
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Congratulations on a wonderful first story. I truly hope that you write more. Great job. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
WyldWyl
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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A brilliant piece of writing. Sizzling hot kinky gay erotica spiced brilliantly with great relations between the two characters made this a top quailty read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cbtboyuk
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2007)
- Wow. i'm so glad you enjoyed the story, Sir - the relationship between them was unplanned - it just came out that way. Thanks so much for this review.
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| Reviewer:
Eric Boss
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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Congratulations on your first story! Excellent, I hope you write more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cbtboyuk
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2007)
- Thank you so much for my first review - and for making it such a good one. i have got some more ideas, Sir, but i'm beginning to wonder if this particular story might not be best left alone.
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