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Fuck Me Then Kill Me
Author: Nialla
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(Added on Aug 10, 2007)
(This month 78589 readers) (Total 107305 readers) |
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When I get really excited I just have to write ! |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Sep 12, 2007 |
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Very short,but still has power and passion.
Interesting read. (7/10)
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Mothbrad
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Sep 12, 2007 |
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I'm glad that this piece (I won't call it a story) has gotten good marks from most people - I found it exhilirating, and full of passion, lust and energy. It will only take you a few minutes to read, but if you read it with the right frame of mind (ie imagining a woman in front of you almost yelling it at you), it will stay in your mind for some time. The mark I've given it here is purely in terms of how successfully the piece achieved its goal, rather than how it compares to other, more detailed stories. (8/10)
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Panther007
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Aug 15, 2007 |
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An interesting style, kind of a stream of consciousness of sex and violence. Almost a tone poem of porn. (5/10)
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JimmyJump
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Aug 12, 2007 |
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It is true that this gathering of, what, 20 sentences, don't make up a story. But that doesn't take away the fact that, altough very short, it's an enjoyable read...
Not a story, indeed, but more a temporary state of mind, a spur of the moment thing. Thoughts that whiz through one's head in a frenzy, when one is passed the point of caring, when moral fibre or reason have to give way to the ticking of one's deepest inner clock... the pure unhampered lust that has nothing to do any longer with reality, but everything with getting there where you want to get...
This raw, short outburst of passion is a perfect example of what happens in the brief moment before the big bang...
Maybe not a great story, but it is a nice portrayal of maybe 1 to 2 seconds of visions at "that" particular moment.
JJ (9/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 12, 2007 |
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Well, it's different, I'll give it that much. As part of a larger tale, I could see it, maybe. Kinda. Almost. Somewhat. Here, it's just a gathering of sentences. The first paragraph is meant to surprise and shock. It might in mainstream writing, but not here.
It's not really a story at all, as in a story something has to happen. Nothing happens here. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2007)
- Quite the contrary, chksng19, *everything* happens here... but it seems you missed it.
JJ
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CoughDrop
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Aug 11, 2007 |
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Not a style of writing I enjoy reading a great deal, though can appreciate it's fervent vibe. (7/10)
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SimonMagick
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Aug 11, 2007 |
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I was imagining aspiring actresses in college drama classes being required to read this and being graded on how convincing they were. They are so desperate for good grades, they call strangers on the phone to say it. Then they are required to practice on men they meet everywhere; shopping, walking in the park, in bars... (9/10)
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