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Slave's First Anal Author: Fred C. Pierce
(Added on Aug 16, 2007) (This month 51492 readers) (Total 64551 readers)
Master takes slave for a ride in the country on His motorcycle, ending in a scene in the woods.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: suspira (Edit) Rating: Aug 22, 2007
Enjoyed it very much :)
(8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 19, 2007
very nicely done, does needsome proof reading but that did not take away from the sstory itself for me (8/10)

Reviewer: donriser (Edit) Rating: Aug 17, 2007
I think you told a wonderful story. No, it wasn't grammatically or stylistically perfect, but I was hooked right away and didn't want to stop reading. I would definitely recommend it to others. Will make a good fantasy of how my own first time might be. Thank you for taking the time to write it and the risk to share it. (8/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Aug 17, 2007
You should educate yourself about paragraphs and what constitutes one! You can have a great idea, but it won't shine without proper writing skills. (7/10)
Replied by: Piers (Edit) (Aug 22, 2007)
Yeah, sorry about the paragraph thing. I'd written it in a non-compatible format. When I reformatted, I forgot to go back over it. I appreciate the criticism, it reminded me to never take anything for granted. :)
Replied by: heycarrieanne (Edit) (Aug 22, 2007)
can you tell i teach? LMAO

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