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Enslaving Abbey
Author: JK
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(Added on Sep 9, 2007)
(This month 142200 readers) (Total 188918 readers) |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Seems to me that there's no enslavement, since Abbey is a born submissive.
All that takes place in this story, is the fine-tuning of the enslavement.
I don't mind, of course, as the story is well layed-out and has just the right pace and tone. I especially like the way Jim Bryant acts and thinks. usually, stories where the male is also the narrator of the story, that character has a tendency to be a bit of an arrogant shit, ready to hammer his superiority into the inferior slavegirl.
Here, we have a caring man, who's only goal is to pry out Abbey's submissive side from in-between the layers of shyness and moral upbringing, without brutalising her mind too much.
Very well done indeed.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2009)
- Abbey is one of my favorite characters. I know of a similar real life situation. I am glad you liked it.
JK
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| Reviewer:
Bs_lilone
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Oct 30, 2007 |
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i absolutely loved this story, i am a happy slave, married to my Husband and Master for 15 years, and while i have not been sent away for training i can relate to abbey. Very creative, an absolute joy to read. Thank You! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2007)
- Thank you for your kind words. I loved the story as I wrote it. I am a "master" and have a beautiful slave. A lot of the elements in the story came from real life. I did send my "slave" to an acquaintance in Tucson who has trained several "slaves". Like Abbey, it was a tough school, but had its rewards. She is a fantastic slave now, and we are very happy.
JK
jkmckelvey2000@yahoo.com
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| Reviewer:
jdsaunders01
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Sep 11, 2007 |
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Great story line, well written & plotted. (9/10)
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