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Chainplay Author: Sys
(Added on Sep 12, 2007) (This month 65716 readers) (Total 88245 readers)
Story about chains and piercings

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Average Rating: (5/10)
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Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: hoodedandmasked (Edit) Rating: Sep 24, 2007
Enjoyed this immensely - yes it needs polish but the underlying ideas are lovely. Thank you. (8/10)

Reviewer: TheVariableX (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2007
Some ok ideas but it just isn't a very complete story. You seem to be passionate about the subject, which is good. A bit of technical work and some more descriptions alone would rate higher. (4/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Sep 14, 2007
A shame; there is a potential story here, it just needs some grammar (such as paragraphs, for instance), some excitement, and a careful editor. Try again, please, once you've gotten the aid suggested by H Dean or elsewhere. (3/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Sep 13, 2007
I don't know what to say except that this felt as if it had been written by a 12 year old. There was no excitement and no life. It was also a technical train wreck.
Check out the "Writers Block" in the forum if you want to seriously improve. (3/10)
Replied by: hoodedandmasked (Edit) (Sep 24, 2007)
Very harsh criticism - the story deserves better
Replied by: H Dean (Edit) (Nov 15, 2007)
No, the readers deserve better.

Reviewer: steph2004ster (Edit) Rating: Sep 13, 2007
gyrl loved the idea and it made her juice. How about a similar story only nc. (7/10)

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