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David Vanishes
Author: JP
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(Added on Nov 14, 2007)
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David travels to Paris and meets a beautiful young woman. As he falls under her spell he has no idea of the life of agony ahead. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
freecroma10
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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The story undoubtedly good and you write very well, I can hope that a female murderous and idiotic man who is similar to this does not exist in the reality. (8/10)
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Longterm247
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Nov 30, 2007 |
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I loved this story, it was one of the best I have ever read on this forum and in terms of BDSM erotica. The plot was not linear and there was no cheesy love plot, it was just plain and utter torment from being captured until the end. Sophie seemed as cruel as Eihi Shiina from the film Audition, which is no bad thing. It would be interesting to learn what made her so sadistic, so cold and merciless. (10/10) (9/10)
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dorothystrangelove
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Nov 22, 2007 |
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This was a story that held my attention all the way to the end, it was descriptive, well paced and the characters were fascinating. I liked this a lot! (7/10)
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submissive_male4u
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Nov 20, 2007 |
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This is one of the best stories I have ever read... I like the plot so much that i think the author could write a novel...
Read it... take my word... Sophie is beautiful... yet cruel (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jpozed
(Edit) (Nov 21, 2007)
- Thank you for the extremely kind comments! I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story so much.
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Nov 20, 2007 |
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An excellent story. The author certainly doesn't pull any punches in where he goes - this is brutal stuff, too strong for most tastes and edgy even for me. But if that's your thing you'll love this! And you have to admire Sophie's determination and single-mindedness. Would be nice to see a sequel, perhaps from her point of view. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jpozed
(Edit) (Nov 21, 2007)
- I'm flattered to receive such a positive review from a writer I admire - many thanks Wistan! I certainly plan to write more stories about Sophie and her exploits, and I think something from her point of view could be very interesting.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Nov 19, 2007 |
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That was a great story but I think it was missing something. But the main character was great. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jpozed
(Edit) (Nov 21, 2007)
- Thanks for the review and rating! What do you think was missing from the story? And which character did you mean, Sophie or David?
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