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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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A good story, with a (just? yup) revenge properly told. I'd love to see a second chapter! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2008)
- Thank you. I probably won't continue this story, as I intended it to be one chapter only from the beginning. However, most of my other stories are similarly short and brutal.
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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I like the concept very much. The only reason I didn't give it a higher rating are the typos and glitches. Also, chapter 2 is a repeat of chapter one; definitely would like to read more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2007)
- I submitted an updated version of the first chapter to fix some of the problems addressed by the earlier reviews, but it was inadvertently posted as chapter two. So, for anyone that is reading this before the repeat gets taken down, 'Chapter 2' is the fixed chapter one.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 5, 2007 |
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It's a very good plot line, Razor. The main character is very focused on revenge. I'd like to see a bit more back story. Hope you will continue. I agree with Mad's review. ;>) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Dec 4, 2007 |
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A few typo and pronoun glitches hurt, but overall an excelent story of mad vengeance. I'd recommend a final edit before posting the next chapter. There is another chapter right? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Dec 4, 2007)
- Whether or not I write the next chapter is yet to be determined, though I know what will happen if it gets written. This was originally planned to be part of my Bad End series, but it didn't fit the format and felt more complete than those short bits.
I'll take another editing pass and update the file.
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