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Motherly Love Author: Razor7826
(Added on Jan 3, 2008) (This month 54721 readers) (Total 72496 readers)
A widow is defiled, but why?

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: Panther007 (Edit) Rating: Mar 26, 2016
Enjoyed this immensely, gripping character and some really hot twisted sex. (8/10)

Reviewer: jls152 (Edit) Rating: Apr 13, 2012
There is little that was developed or original to enjoy. (6/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 16, 2009
Story deserves a better treatment, meaning, expanding on background as well as on the 'activities' during the rape.
Getting bored writing sex-scenes comes across rather weird when laying the emphasis on the rape.
If you want to tone down the rape, you must (a word I seldom use) shift the attention towards the shenanigans of the daughter and the instigation that brought forth the rape.
Now, you have a start that's incomplete, a sex-scene which was written while yawning and watching the clock, and an ending that seems rushed.
The story was, luckily, well written, but still felt like a pond where a thousand Inuït had been ice-fishing: full of holes.
Some may think the review to be negative. I would call it constructive criticism.
Oh, and letting the rapists use Nixon masks adds nothing but the knowledge that you've also seen the Kathryn Bigelow picture "Point Break"...
JJ (8/10)
Replied by: Razor7826 (Edit) (Feb 16, 2009)
I appreciate your detailed analysis and critique.
Oh, and I've never seen Point Break. It's just an extraordinarily generic and overused mask.

Reviewer: Nemz (Edit) Rating: Jan 8, 2008
A very interesting and depressing story. Really well done though. I would try expanding the opening a bit more. I honestly felt the main character was rather distant and wasn't easy to connect with the readers. If you wanted the story to be a more sexual piece, I'd also suggest adding more detail to the action. (9/10)
Replied by: Razor7826 (Edit) (Jan 8, 2008)
To be honest, extended sex scenes bore me. Such an opinion is probably unusual for somebody that writes for this webpage, but writing them gets repetitive real quick. So, I prefer to focus the events and emotions surrounding them.
I see what you are saying with the distant main character. I need to work on my writing voice if I am to portray the narrators in a more interesting light.

Reviewer: bmtphoenix (Edit) Rating: Jan 7, 2008
Very well done, I like. (9/10)
Replied by: Razor7826 (Edit) (Jan 7, 2008)
Thank you for the positive feedback.

Reviewer: DeGrinch (Edit) Rating: Jan 6, 2008
Well done, good job. I did think you could of expanded her reaction to her abuse, however. (8/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Jan 4, 2008
Unlike most of the offerings here this is a story in which the brutality and sadism are crucial parts but not the main point.The main character is well developed, for such a short piece. She is complex and flawed without "Deserving it" which makes her all the more believable. Best of all the ending leaves you thinking. Well done. (9/10)

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