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Graduation Party
Author: Anne
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
(This month 79834 readers) (Total 115998 readers) |
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A teacher receives an unusual gift from her former students: A weekend of slavery and humiliation. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
RallyWeasel
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Oct 6, 2012 |
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A nicely written story that kept me interested throughout. The ending was particularly satisfying. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Okay, so the pace was a tad on the fast side, but the story is well written and the personality of Anne is nicely painted.
A very good read.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
weirdmeijin
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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I really enjoyed this story. It was quite an improvement from your previous works, although I do think you could have developed the main character's feelings a bit more. Aside from a few grammatical errors, it was great! (10/10)
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DarkPoet
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Mar 2, 2008 |
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I like this story very much, the only thing to nitpick about is the fast pace. You could still improve the story by explaining more of your main character's inner turmoil (we readers all feed on the fear and humiliation buildup ;). Nevertheless, I'm eager to read more of it. (9/10)
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skullblade
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Feb 25, 2008 |
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I like the whole idea and would love to read more of either this story if it continues or another like it in the future. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 21, 2008 |
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very well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Charles E. Campbell
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Feb 20, 2008 |
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Well written, and highly believable. The ending points toward additional chapters, which I look forward to. Keep it up. (9/10)
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masterdw
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Feb 14, 2008 |
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I especially liked the way you established motivation. My only quibble is that you went too fast and did not leave yourself room to build. (9/10)
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copper thorn
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Feb 12, 2008 |
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A compelling story. Thanks! (10/10)
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