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Dungeon Crawl
Author: ghostgirl
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(Added on Mar 24, 2008)
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A pretty sub gets more than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Terr(or)ific little tale. Nothing more, nothing less.
Excellent exploit!
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Pussycat Sam
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Apr 1, 2008 |
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More more more!! PLEASE!! This is great stuff, can't wait to read the next chapter!!
xxx (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostgirl
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2008)
- Thank you for the positive review, Pussycat. Glad you enjoyed it...more on the way.
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| Reviewer:
fantazmaster
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Mar 28, 2008 |
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The story starts out with an interesting buildup,followed by a very well crafted unexpected twist via the cab driver abductor.I am sure this is not the only unexpected twist in this story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostgirl
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2008)
- Thank you very much, fantazmaster...and yes, i'm fond of twisty plots, and i love nasty surprises.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Mar 26, 2008 |
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Very good job!!! I am eager to read more! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostgirl
(Edit) (Mar 27, 2008)
- Thank you for the review, heycarrieanne, glad you enjoyed. i'm working on chapter two...
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| Reviewer:
VVV
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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This very well-written short story thrilled me with a look inside a world I have only dreamt of -- the scene at a BDSM club as viewed through the eyes of a beautiful, confident, pain-loving regular. This tour, though brief, is full of images of the scene and gave me a feel for what it would have been like to be there. And the character... well,I just hope ghostgirl continues the story as I would like to see more done with this girl. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostgirl
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2008)
- MothBrad and VVV....it's always a thrill to get compliments from writers i admire. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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Fascinating and tantalising, cool and poetic piece that I hope you go on with and take to the next level. A ballet dancer who gets fired for letting show too many of her welts?! What a lovely image, and that's only one of so many! Highly recommended. (9/10)
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