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Alyssa Alvarez: Farm Girl
Author: Desiree Thorn
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(Added on Apr 13, 2008)
(This month 92407 readers) (Total 134735 readers) |
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Among the Agropadronists, a cunt-service fundamentalist faith practiced by the occupants of a remote valley on an even more remote planet, Alyssa Alvarez approaches her Service Presentation Rites with glee, believing better things await at the hands of her Farm-Lord. Instead, her parents learn of Alyssa's illicit sexual interests and sell her into slavery off-plant. |
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Average (?): (9/10) |
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Most extraordinary tale. A pleasant surprise, both in inventiveness as on the ability of recounting. Splendid, imaginative narration of a society gone off it's rocker, but in fact not so far from what used to happen in the middle- to late middle ages in England. Very well done, Des. JJ (10/10)
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Reviewer:
alamainen
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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Terrific story: well visualized world, great characters, great detail. I see you haven't updated it in several months, and I hope you do keep writing it. I love Alyssa's character and am looking forward to seeing what happens to her and what she thinks of it... (10/10)
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Reviewer:
madeline
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May 16, 2008 |
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I love this story, and love this world you've created in it. I look forward to more. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
lilit69
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May 7, 2008 |
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Very well written, enticing plot line. (9/10)
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