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Jade's Extraordinary Sufferning Author: PalmCivet
(Added on Apr 27, 2008) (This month 66598 readers) (Total 96835 readers)
Jade is a slave who is in the basement dungeon of her master, Jake. This is part one of a longer story.

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Weighed Average (?): (5/10)
Average Rating: (5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: turgid (Edit) Rating: May 4, 2008
Not smooth, too short, actions are not explicit. Needs detail. Good scene, potential. (4/10)

Reviewer: Jack Schitt (Edit) Rating: May 3, 2008
Great Story....I'm going to try some of the moves on my sub soon! I'm anxiously awinting the next chapter! 7 (7/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Apr 30, 2008
The story does not flow--very stilted writing. I think this stems from you attempting to write in the first person AND in present tense. That is combo that very rarely works. (4/10)

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