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Lisa's Demise
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on May 26, 2008)
(This month 66425 readers) (Total 87739 readers) |
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Lisa is kidnapped and tortured before facing her final challenge. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Venom
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Jun 1, 2008 |
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Again Good Work, Excalibur. You promised an extreme story, and you kept your promise. But the narration could be a bit longer, and that Lisa orgasmed during her rape is a BDSM-cliché. Nonetheless I'm looking forward to round two with Tina... (8/10)
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