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Training A Slave
Author: whipmaster
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(Added on Jan 1, 2002)
(This month 95711 readers) (Total 172392 readers) |
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A young girl submits herself to be trained as a slave (based on a true story). |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Switchhitter7
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Mar 20, 2009 |
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I wonder why your master has never used slaves cunt or ass. Seems rather limiting. And the purpose of watching the slaves toilet is not to please the master but to humiliate the slaves. I hope you will continue the story ans find new ways to use the slaves, because you are in danger of boredom being the ultimate punishment (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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An in-depth, almost clinical account of the subjugation of a more-or-less willing participant. Very well executed and believable story.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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May 14, 2006 |
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good flow, good theme, well written great detail (10/10)
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tragedy3
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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good story, well written and believable. glad to see a master show some concern for his slave. can not wait to see the story develop more as they both learn. (9/10)
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zodiaclibra84
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Nov 22, 2005 |
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This is the first story that I have read on this site, but I enjoyed it very much. Just would like to add that I would recommend this story to anyone. I liked the way that the character Debbie felt to passionate in the begining, but I bet that she is thinking twice about her huge decision. Great Job to Whipmaster. (9/10)
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Aquilegia
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Sep 10, 2004 |
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Some good writing make this enjoyable. Good detail, and imaginative.
The ending is rather abrupt, just as the story got going! (7/10)
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fox21
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Oct 1, 2002 |
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Best BDSM I've read, really!!! Outstanding scenes and stuff. Hope the 4 chapters are only the beginning... do you know if there are others? (10/10)
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copith
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Jan 8, 2002 |
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Best I've read on this website. Inspired stuff. Looking forward to more chapters. (10/10)
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drayman
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Jan 8, 2002 |
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Well written and very entertaining story of the submission of a woman seeking to explore the world of D/s (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmaster
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Jan 5, 2002 |
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This story is the best i have written so far on this website. Surely a 10!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Jan 3, 2002 |
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Excellent story. Great details about the punishments and humiliations. Some typos and omitted words but all in all top notch. The only thing bad was the brevity of the story. (8/10)
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