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Oh to be thin Author: SG
(Added on Jul 24, 2008) (This month 65031 readers) (Total 80922 readers)
Rachel's plan to diet by excercise backfires when some unexpected guests pay her a visit

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Oct 11, 2010
Story irritated me no end because of the use of the word 'table' seven times in six consecutive sentences. Get a synonym dictionary, or restructure your sentences, please.
Story was, besides my irritations, a nice read, with a likable character in the form Erin.
SG's inventiveness is what 'saves' the story in the end. Because, and although "Oh To Be Thin" is a nice read, it also is constructed rather clumsily.
JJ (8/10)

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