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The Making of Monique Author: Nick Adams
(Added on Dec 4, 2008) (This month 69074 readers) (Total 92056 readers)
An Asian college student is lured into taking a modeling job which leads to a life of sexual slavery.

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Weighed Average (?): (9/10)
Average Rating: (9.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 1, 2009
Another delicious well written short, with an exquisite lass in the slender form of Monique.
Everything works well, until the last scene, where, by some magic only known to the author, spreader bars and overhead beams with conveniently attached ropes appear out of nothing to supposedly give the finale more body.
A pity, because Nick Adams apparantly seems to have enough imagination to not having to come-up with some wizardry to knit a decent ending to a story.
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: Tarl L'Huntre (Edit) Rating: Jan 2, 2009
Nick, you are a good writer. I know the girl you are writing for, I have written for her before. She is well worth the time coz she is the hottest submissive I have ever known. Has she sent you photos? By the way keep writing - good story. "Monique" loves the threat of her parents finding out, and the possibility of tattoos and adores the sound of a padlock being clicked shut on her body somewhere. (9/10)

Reviewer: IowaSubmissiveGuy (Edit) Rating: Dec 11, 2008
Excellent.
Part two is at the following link everyone, He hasn't made p3.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=394667 (10/10)

Reviewer: Eternalstudent (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2008
Very cleam style. I can't wait for more. (10/10)

Reviewer: Grey_Slayer (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2008
Very enjoyable and erotic. Please continue the story and/or write more. (10/10)

Reviewer: charissa (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2008
I'm impressed (excellent writing even aside from the beautiful erotica) and turned on. Bravo. Looking forward to the next. (10/10)

Reviewer: Tleanne5664 (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2008
Very enjoyable. I want to know more about Darion..he seems intriguing.
Monique is intense and the plot believeable. my favorite part was the subs dream...foreshadowing?? Keep going! (9/10)

Reviewer: LongHardWinter (Edit) Rating: Dec 8, 2008
Superb. One of the best I've read in a while. (10/10)

Reviewer: slut2002gyrl (Edit) Rating: Dec 5, 2008
gyrl feels this will be awesome. you are an excellent writer and the pacing/flow feels right! (10/10)

Reviewer: jkim (Edit) Rating: Dec 5, 2008
A hot start! Run with it!!!!!!!!!! (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Dec 5, 2008
nice start pening where you go next (7/10)

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