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Sara's Plight
Author: slut_jasmine
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(Added on Dec 17, 2008)
(This month 83875 readers) (Total 109466 readers) |
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With bills piling up and no job, Sara is desperate to get some sort of income rolling in. She applied for a waitressing job at a rather shady bar. Things can't go that bad, can they? |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
NaughtyNora
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Jan 14, 2009 |
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Very hot! I love the idea and the modification was fantastic. I would have loved more detail about the physical acts in the story: the blow jobs, fucking, etc. I agree with the three other reviews- it did move a bit too quickly at the end. Personally, I would have loved more vivid descriptions of the breast modification, but overall great story. I'll be reading it again I'm sure! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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nice concept for a story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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Though I read something similar, a few years ago, this still makes for some excellent reading. To my taste, the story's pace is a tad too quick, forgoing on detail in the process. But I liked it enough the way it is.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
The Virginian
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Dec 20, 2008 |
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A satisfying little tale of unexpected forced submission to hold a job in a club, the story is told in one chapter, and builds nicely with the "changes" in the waitress' job duties evolving as it goes along. The change of voice in the last paragraph is a little jarring, however. (8/10)
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