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My First great Humilitation
Author: slavenikkii
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 49290 readers) (Total 61342 readers) |
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i get humiliated and get embarrassed which i never get in my whole life.Its a true story, read it and please send your comments. |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slutboy4HER
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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Nice idea, too bad you can't use basic English above eight year old level or actually WRITE! Either stick to your native language, get an education, or forget writing!! I am a horrible writer myself and very poor in the grammer & spelling areas, but blindfolded and drunk, even i could do better if I wished to inflict my poor writing on anyone. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Ok Title but its straight down hill from there on in. I still have not figured out if the character is male or female but frankly I don't care.
It really is not worth the effort to critique, or even read (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Mistress should shoot you, to put us out of our misery. SirBosk1 surmises that English isn't Nik's first language, but I suggest it's not even his fifth...
Am not into male humiliation, just read this out of curiosity because of the low score.
Writing is ridiculous. Point.
JJ (1/10)
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SirBosk1
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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English is not this author's first language. Maybe if it was written in his language, it would be decent. As it is, no. (1/10)
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