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Author: msterspuppy
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(Added on Mar 1, 2009)
(This month 63155 readers) (Total 71546 readers) |
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submissive searches for a new life as a pet |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
thehammerspakeagain
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Mar 24, 2009 |
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ok story, but as jimmy says, keep the paragraph separate and choose a more readable font. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
fallenstar
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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very nice, looking forward to more.. always love a pet story :) (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
joshjg
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Mar 3, 2009 |
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Looking forward to more of the story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 2, 2009 |
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A remarkable entrée, for sure. Well written, to the point little vignette.
Just make sure to keep paragraphs separated, instead of posting everything in one chunk, although that is not always the doing of the writer as the site seems to have a mind of its own when it concerns formatting.
Well done, msterspuppy.
JJ (9/10)
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