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A Devilish Desire
Author: SG
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(Added on Mar 5, 2009)
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Decked out in costume and tied in a strappado, Whitney was the perfect graduation gift for her boyfriend Ricky. To her surprise someone else came through the front door. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nasferi
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Apr 30, 2011 |
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i thought it was a great story write some more (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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The only surprise, or twist if you like, was given away in the synopsys.
The fact that in the story, there's not happening anything besides what was said in that synopsys, could either mean that it is an excellent synopsys, or that the first part of this here story was rather stretched-out.
I fear it's the latter.
Lengthy descriptions again, flooding the reader with unnecessary information, make the read a struggle against boredom.
Still, a decent introduction to a promising story.
JJ (7/10)
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