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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
saxman66
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Mar 12, 2011 |
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Lyn
Interesting idea and shows what might happen in terms of fundraising if you can avoid the authorities/parents suddenly saying WTF. However not sure the way the violence is suddenly introduced without the girls [in most cases anyway] being aware of it in advance is that realistic. Would probably have a number of criminal preceeding rapidly following them being let free. [True a lot of the stories on the site requires far more suspension of disbelieve but it's a question of fitting in with the rest of the story which is pretty down to earth]. Also I suspect if the two who had their feet canned had anything like that number of blows they won't be walking on tip-toe but would be being taken to hospital. Especially since it's from a range of different people presumably without experience on how much damage they can do.
However that quibble aside its a good read and a light-hearted little story and would love to see more. Think their going to reach their funding targets but a lot of the girls could be in hospital/police station for a while afterwards. :)
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Nice, well written story. Suffers a bit from lack of genneral detail -making the story too narrow makes it seem the people in it have no lives bar their sexual shenanigans- but the setting is such that this doesn't bother too much...
Would be great to see "Renaissance..." continued still.
JJ (8/10)
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cma68
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Jun 14, 2010 |
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I really enjoyed this story, it was just the right level of reluctant schoolgirl getting in over her head to make it interesting while still being somewhat believable. Please finish the story -- there's so much more to tell! (9/10)
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