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The Journey
Author: darkman
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(Added on Dec 20, 2009)
(This month 55354 readers) (Total 71528 readers) |
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a young women's short and deadly journey into the world of pain and pleasure |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Excalibur_1949
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Dec 26, 2009 |
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I would have liked to read this story, but after half an hour of re-formatting it, and correcting the many spelling mistakes, I gave up. Trying to read a single sentence split over three or four lines, when a single line would have been good, makes it hard to read. (5/10)
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