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Unrestrained Desires
Author: M.M.
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(Added on Dec 31, 2009)
(This month 89143 readers) (Total 124973 readers) |
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One man dreams come true...or not? |
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Feb 24, 2010 |
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Good ideas Poor grammar and spelling detract (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Feb 13, 2010 |
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The writing skills need a lot of work. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
tltslv
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Feb 8, 2010 |
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I think this story is getting far more interesting now (after Chapter 5). I would love to read about the psychological motivations of each. (8/10)
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jms21921
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Jan 2, 2010 |
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Definitely needed more plot development. I was hoping there was a Page 2 that I was missing as the ending was way too abrupt. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jan 1, 2010 |
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Way too short. No character development. Maybe future chapters will be better. The problem is that I usually will not bother to look for new chapters. (4/10)
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