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Consequenses of Embezzlement
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Jan 17, 2010)
(This month 61998 readers) (Total 81581 readers) |
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Rather than taking his and his friend’s wife to court for embezzling a considerable sum of money, Alan hands them over to ‘The Organisation’ for punishment and disposal. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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I must go through Obohobo's stories again, because I'm pretty sure there's another story somewhere which has the exact same intro, with the wife having embezzled money from her husband, with the help of a female accomplice...
anyway, I found "Consequences..." to be a thorough pleasurable read.
contrary to 'Stroking Willie' and Dryhill, I found enough character development in the story to fill a medium-sized walk-in closet.
That there's 'no feeling gained from the participants' is also something I have to disagree with as I had no problems with the narrative from Eve's point of view, nor with emphatizing with the characters.
Very good story.
JJ (9/10)
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