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Bare Legs
Author: w.l. telford
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(Added on Apr 5, 2010)
(This month 54721 readers) (Total 68552 readers) |
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A decision about attire presents a college professor with an unexpected new career choice. |
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tommie123
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Jan 6, 2012 |
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I rather like Telford's stuff. He actually creates characters in which one can at least believe in the sense that they function in a fantasy...which is rare in BDSM literature This piece, strikes a particularly pleasant note for me because it reminds me of the the escapades that my wife and I used to get up to when we were younger. (10/10)
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tortoiseshell
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Apr 25, 2011 |
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I hate writing reviews... but I liked this story, short, light and flirty (9/10)
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janmayen
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Dec 30, 2010 |
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Another great story by my favorite writer on this site.
Hope that he will continue this tale and pimp the heroine out full time :-) (10/10)
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Mort
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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I'm a sucker for stories where the woman submits, disrobes for a stranger voluntarily, and gives up sex - this story tripped my trigger. Thanks. (9/10)
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Major Littmann
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Apr 21, 2010 |
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Spoiled by the constant and confusing switching between the two principal characters as narrator I wonder if there is an easy way for this type of story to work because what charm it has is in the interaction between these two's point of view. (7/10)
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Michael247
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Apr 20, 2010 |
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This was an excellent short story, superbly paced, and well written. I found the formatting to be a bit choppy, with odd spaces here and there that detracted from the story itself. I also think this story might have been better told from a third person omniscient perspective, since the author had to change from the unnamed husband to Lisa in order to tell the story. But even then, this was done relatively well. *** I have to wonder if Lisa plans on returning to "work", especially since her next engagement will almost assuredly involve sexual intercourse, rather than just a blowjob. I sense the author is setting us up for a serial or a sequel. Hopefully the latter. I'm not that fond of serials. *** Descriptions were excellent, especially considering the POV and it was easy to imagine myself sitting there at the table, looking across at Lisa and admiring the view. All in all a nice little short story. Thanks. Micheal Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)
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sedmwif
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Apr 16, 2010 |
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Another outstanding piece of writing from telford. (10/10)
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castle2001
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Apr 12, 2010 |
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Excellent short. As with the authors last characters are great. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 12, 2010 |
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A little predictable and lack of characterization however grammar and spelling were alright. If there are more chapters to follow, then i might be able to give a higher rating. (6/10)
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