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Nikki runs out of luck Author: whipigorus
(Added on Jun 9, 2010) (This month 58867 readers) (Total 74493 readers)
Nikki, a young Doctor who works for the rebels, is captured by the secret police and forced to give up vital information after two sessions of brutal torture. After that she is executed

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Reviewer: dog_man (Edit) Rating: Jun 17, 2010
It was an interesting story. It would have been useful to describe the condition of Nikki's nipples after the electrical torture beyond merely saying that they were 'ruined'. Had Nikki's nipple buds been burned off as a result of the torture perhaps? Possible sequels to this story could be the stories of the other women who were executed along with Nikki that day. Tell us about their capture, interrogation, torture and mutilation prior to being placed before the firing squad. (7/10)

Reviewer: Venom (Edit) Rating: Jun 12, 2010
The style is not bad considering English is not the author's mother tongue. Furthermore, the first paragraph manages to create a suitable atmosphere and guides the reader into the story. Only the capture scene itself could be a little bit more detailed. (8/10)

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