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My last thoughts Author: CathySt11
(Added on Jun 10, 2010) (This month 62785 readers) (Total 74315 readers)
Being consumed by my masters python.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
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Reviewer: Doc_Odd (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2011
I like victim POV vore generally, and this is a nice example of it! Not really interested in the "master" character, so I'm glad the story talks about him relatively little, at least once the snake gets busy. (9/10)

Reviewer: Polecat (Edit) Rating: Oct 20, 2010
Nicely done and with a bit of humor in it.
Worth reading (8/10)

Reviewer: NightshadeXX {tyd} (Edit) Rating: Jun 14, 2010
Regardless of 'reality', I think the story was well written, rather interesting and a good story, overall. This is the point of *fantasy* erotic stories, is it not?
I thought it was a good read and kept my attention, which many sotories I've read fail to do. I fully enjoyed it. (9/10)

Reviewer: iowasunflower (Edit) Rating: Jun 14, 2010
was ok but a python does not just swallow prey they squeeze it and kill it before eating it.
Story was unreal (4/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jun 11, 2010
Okay. That was that. A voice from beyond the grave. Or beyond the stomach. Cool. Now, get on to that 1055-pager and tell us what happened while being with master. Because, that's what's hidden in this 14kb short: a complete novel.
"My Last Thoughts" itself isn't bad, mind. It's well written, cute even, but there's so much here one could elaborate on.
Besides, isn't it a tad difficult to be telling us a story, from the first-person view, (mostly) in the present tense, while being...errr...quite dead? Okay, so there is such a thing as poetic licence, and the author's perogative, I know...
Still, while you do seem to have a writing talent lurking in that Python's digestive system, I'll be on the look-out for further writings from your hands. Just wash 'em first, please.
JJ (7/10)

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