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The Hospital
Author: Anonymyte
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(Added on Aug 27, 2000)
(This month 72870 readers) (Total 108033 readers) |
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She was in a hospital, captured, bound helpless, hypnotized, waiting for any treatment that the doctors and nurses wanted to give her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Happy123456
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The pacing was perfect. I loved the characterizations of all the people involved. Your descriptions of the actions and the characters really added a lot to the story. Many writers tend to want to gloss over details. Excellent work! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Aug 13, 2004 |
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i really enjoyed this story, but ... what happened to them? please go back and finish this one! inquiring minds need to know. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
wabusheshe
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Feb 12, 2002 |
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The author has the makings of a great story. It is well written and leads the reader on slowly bit by bit building towards a climax. A climax that never comes.
The story just stops. It does not have an ending, leaving the reader totally disappointed. I wanted to know what happened to Jenny & Saffron, and who were the two men? What happened when they were finished? Anonymyte, you left us hangin' man. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
peyo |
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Feb 13, 2001 |
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moi, j'ai bien aim¨¦ ! (8/10)
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Raven |
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Nov 11, 2000 |
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Not too bad.... (5/10)
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tattoo pat |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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a bit long but nice (4/10)
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Leonard |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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Too much time before the action starts. Too much words. (3/10)
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