|
|
|
|
|
The Meeting
Author: Xavier
|
| |
(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
(This month 50070 readers) (Total 57903 readers) |
| |
Xavier meets Taylor, and quickly learns to worship her ass. They have a wild, gassy night of domination. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 1 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
100% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (6/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
wistan
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Nov 28, 2010 |
| |
Not a bad little beginning, this. The switches in point of view are a bit distracting, though. It's not a bad thing in and of itself, but it happens so often here - like every five or ten lines - that it kind of breaks the flow. If you want to keep up with this I'd advise you to go at least a page on each person's viewpoint before switching. (6/10)
|
|
|
About 