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Capturing A New Slave
Author: Submissive TJ
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(Added on Dec 2, 2010)
(This month 58731 readers) (Total 77654 readers) |
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Alex is taken by her new master and introduced to her new life as his toy. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jul 1, 2011 |
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Almost a five, but i am feeling generous.
The lack of any emotions from Cocktoy until the last paragraph (and then only about the trouble she is going to have that night with the vibrator in her pussy) ruins the story for me. Also i would have thought Master would have told her what would eventually happen to her, after all he mentions she is His NEW toy enough times. Actually i think i am being far to nice giving this a six! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bad Dad
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Dec 15, 2010 |
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I liked it. Would have liked to read about the actual abduction. Take your time on the next chapter. I look forward to what he puts poor Alex through. And one techy thing. I don't think duct tape is going to stick to a sloppy pussy. :) (8/10)
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TheMiller
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Dec 11, 2010 |
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I hope there is more on the way. Good writing and a good start for what can be a great story. (7/10)
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biguysub
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Dec 8, 2010 |
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Very, Very well written! This Super-HOT story has me waiting MY turn at "Cocktoy"!! (9/10)
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sub_Miss64
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Dec 6, 2010 |
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cant wait for more! (7/10)
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