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Callum and Adam torment Lily Author: Chris Born
(Added on Jan 16, 2011) (This month 64580 readers) (Total 79605 readers)
Two teenage step brothers get bored of playing BDSM games with each other blackmail a young girl into becoming their pain toy. An attempt at making a BDSM story with no nudity or overtly sexual content.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (9.5/10)
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Reviewer: troper44 (Edit) Rating: Jan 26, 2011
Really turned me on even without using any nudity or sex acts.
I really hope to read more like this / taking it further. (10/10)

Reviewer: Michael247 (Edit) Rating: Jan 19, 2011
How... terribly awesome.
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Okay first things first, I know that there wasn't much erotica in this story, but the delicious descriptions of the torture, even the silly agreement not to expose her "delicate" parts, was absolutely stunning. This was a great opening to what should be a whole series of Callum and Adam stories that steadily get more darker and more sexual with each telling. Hopefully with new girls each time as well.
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The writing itself was pretty good, with complex and compound sentences making up most of the narrative. There was also a good balance between dialog and action, with plenty of good description. I didn't notice any errors, but I read fast and was entranced by the story.
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All in all, an excellent jumping off point. I hope that there will be a whole series of Callum and Adam stories!
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)

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