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The Storm
Author: Mariah H.
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(Added on Sep 10, 2000)
(This month 50440 readers) (Total 67760 readers) |
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D/s based story of a rape, perhaps fantasy fulfilled involving 2 maybe 3 men and one woman. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tbear4759
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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sorry, it was too poorly written to deserve a higher score. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sara5
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Apr 2, 2006 |
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I liked this story. The frantic pace of the writing style reflected her inner thoughts, the way that you sometimes do think. A comment was made...was it 1,2 or 3 rapists?..well the lights were out, she was blindfolded in a pillowcase...she didn't know! I also feel I have to contradict "bondage man" for another poor review, although I suppose we are all entitled to our own opinions! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bondage_man69
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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boring, poor grammer, etc. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Nov 7, 2003 |
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The editing seemed to come apart badly on the upload or the author's proofing program. I would have rated the story higher if I knew what I was reading: a rape story with one guy? Two guys? No rape at all but a fantasy love story? (sigh) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
I_Surrender
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Feb 9, 2003 |
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very well written short story. I loved the ending. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
A Brunette Woman. |
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Sep 22, 2000 |
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Very well done for such a short story. Good story line, well written, nice ending. A bit of editing would improve the story, but overall, very good. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Sep 13, 2000 |
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Well written, nice build-up considering the length of the story. Liked the ending. Not enough violence for my tastes, but that's life. (7/10)
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