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Taking Becky
Author: Bondage Becky
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(Added on Jul 28, 2012)
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A short capture story |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Aug 7, 2012 |
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Nice start, I hope to see more bondage and punishment. The story is well written but I would like to know more about what the characters feel and think, otherwise keep it up and I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Maitre1962
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Aug 5, 2012 |
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A VERY nice start! Thankyou for taking the time to write! I would love to see more of becky and her Master! I would have given you the top score,if the story had been a little longer and had gone more into deapth about what sort of equipment he had collected andd the other preparations he has made for her captivity.
(9/10)
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coyote3k
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Jul 29, 2012 |
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I thought this was a great start and I would like to see you continue this story. I can't wait to get to some more action like more severe punishments. I think you did very well describing Becky, the shy quiet type who doesn't realize how sexy she is.
Take the story wherever you want of course but if you're open to suggestions, I would love to read about some torture for her "full, natural chest".
The only thing keeping me from giving a higher rating was that it was too short to really get into. Like I said, great start, please keep writing! (8/10)
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