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Hard Time
Author: Texas Twister
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(Added on Jan 4, 2003)
(This month 28816 readers) (Total 52668 readers) |
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Convicted felon's in Texas get the opportunity to commute their sentence by becoming a slave in a private penal system. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 13, 2005 |
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It a good story. The sad part is, nothing as been added in over a year (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 27, 2004 |
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this kind of story has always been f intrest to me, i hope you add more as time goes on (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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"She knew it would be bad"? Perhaps it's me, but that's a bit of a sad line. Also, spelling was not the greatest, something that a spell check would have done wonders. "Know" instead of "now", "gaurd" instead of "guard". Very simple stuff. Story-wise, it was good. Perhaps a bit "perverted", but I can live with that.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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Ouch. Nice torture story. I liked it. A bit perverted and set in Texas. What's not to like? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2003)
- My sarcasm meter is reading "Oh, none at all".
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| Reviewer:
Firepager
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Jan 5, 2003 |
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a great start, i cant wait to see what comes next (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Jan 5, 2003 |
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Hello Sir..
I enjoyed the story..i was thinking i am glad i was not her.. WOW and OUCHIE>.just thinking of the welts and the purplish marking across her tits makes me wonder will she be able to sit or put a bra on.. i was wondering will you add more..
but i enjoyed it and ty so much for writing for us (7/10)
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