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Nightmare Creatures Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
(Added on Apr 28, 2003) (This month 58755 readers) (Total 99230 readers)
Beautiful Model on assignment, ravaged by mutant creatures.

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Highest Rating: (10/10)
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Reviewer: teamster (Edit) Rating: Apr 11, 2004
An excellent effort and a very enjoyable read, marred only by a few wrong word choices {bona petite for bon appetit, etc.} which could be easily fixed. A nice break from the usual endless floggings, etc. It has many of the elements I find most appealing... reluctant sub forced to respond against her will by drug injections, etc. You have a monstrous imagination. And the way that you left the part about the fly critter sort of unfinished was very clever. Sometimes it is better to suggest than to describe every detail... I'll have to look for some of your other work. (9/10)

Reviewer: agp_millie (Edit) Rating: Jul 15, 2003
WoW!
in fantasy, i'm envious. (10/10)

Reviewer: deepbluemm (Edit) Rating: May 6, 2003
Hi Again Mellanie
I have been reviewing the newest stories and have come upon another of yours!!
Honey the direction that you are coming from turns me on so much. It is so fresh and realistic. I guess partly because it is written from the sub's (the woman!!) perspective. And you write of such proud bitches. It just strikes a cord within me. Again happy to correspond.
With much appreciation
Mike (10/10)

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