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Monday Water Cooler Crowd
Author: Eric Burgess
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(Added on Nov 8, 2003)
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A new employee approaches a group of friends at the water cooler to see what they get up to and ends up with his hands tied between his legs. |
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Nov 11, 2003 |
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Readable I guess. It's an ok read if you can get over the Auzzie vernacular. I suspect this may be this author's first try. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Nov 10, 2003 |
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An interesting idea. I hope that the writer will develop the concept further. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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Not bad, but there needs to be more descriptive details. Good ideas though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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Eric, it was okay, but would be improved if you enticed the reader with better descriptions. i.e. you wrote: "she was naked". Granted, we all know what a naked woman looks like, but it's nice to have some details. Punctuation was erratic throughout. (5/10)
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