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Laura's Torture
Author: bulldog
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
(This month 64052 readers) (Total 110307 readers) |
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Laura has long had fantasies about being tortured. She finds a club where sadistic fantasies are acted out, and is tortured by Martha, who loves to inflict pain. |
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Average (?): (9/10) |
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Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Really well done. More realistic than most. Quite believable. Like to read more on this. (10/10)
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mkemse
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May 3, 2005 |
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great story (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Oct 25, 2004 |
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(8/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 11, 2004 |
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Good story, well written. I hope that Martha is simply letting her off easy with the first chapters, and will get more stern and severe. Well edited story, flows well and keeps you involved. Sorry there wasn't more. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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Terrific story! How wonderfully cruel. A sadist myself, I could easily get inside the torturer's head. I can't wait to see the second and subsequent parts, and will be watching this author with interest. Keep up the excellent work! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
_nightowl_
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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excellent. anxiouly waiting for more (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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To be totally honest, I almost gave this story a 10, because the writing was decriptive, well put together, flowing, and most of all: lurid. The only issue was that I felt I was only reading half the story. 11kb? Come on. That doesn't rate even as a seven pager! It is like one of those old television shows that leave you with a cliffhanger, begging you to come back. I approve of that method, but I need a slice of pie, not just a single finger licking. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
angelgirl
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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I loved your story. I am a totally sub female; if it had been a guy doing it I would have sworn you had read my diaries. I would have cum a lot more.....I only came seven times HA HA Love Angelgirl (10/10)
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