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The Session
Author: volts jolts
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(Added on Oct 17, 2005)
(This month 53524 readers) (Total 79568 readers) |
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pain play with an electric shock strap-on dildo |
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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Well, I thought this deserved more than a 5. It was pretty well written and very intense, although short. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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Good idea, but the use of the word "restaint" was too much( five times in the first two paragraphs). Otherwise, not bad. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
voltsjolts
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2006)
- that was good input. check out the rewrite and let me know what you think.
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