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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Iddu
(Edit) |
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Dec 14, 2014 |
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Loved this story. What was particularly exciting was Kadija submissiveness. When Abigail plans to whip her pussy, she immediately spreads her legs. Wonderful ! I hope there is going to be a sequence in which the two slaves are further mistreated and humiliated. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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Not a bad story but bound to offend some. (not an easy thing to do here)
A few grammatical bloopers such as verb tense and plural agreement or for that mater gender agreement (is Abby a Mistress or a Master?) and in the final paragraph manner might be more appropriate than matter. Still as a historic piece it's not bad, you might want to consider using a sprinkling of nineteenth century vocabulary in you dialogue. Just some thoughts from a rambling mad man. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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good story but not realistic (7/10)
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brittany heart
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- can you tell me why did you not find it realistic
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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The story is ok but lacks reality. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
brittany heart
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- are u joking?
Why on earth it lacks reality
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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Even though all of your stories are fundamentally the same, I dored the torture sequences you are able to, so fluntly describe! I only wish I knew personnaly someone of your exact, writing nature! (10/10)
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