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Mortal Kombat
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Mar 13, 2006)
(This month 50964 readers) (Total 60184 readers) |
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About Princess Kitana ending up as a BDSM toy to two men, Jax and Johnny Cage |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 29, 2007 |
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the story was ok, my issue is that most of your stories even with different charactor is the same basic genre and genenre's need to be changed from time to time, only so many way you can use the same themem, after 3-5 years tv show go away because they can not come up with script ideas (6/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2006)
- Thanks for your suggestion.
Tell you what. Why don't you e mail and tell me of a theme that I should try writing on. Fresh ideas are always a good idea and maybe you can ENLLIGHTEN me a little.
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Apr 21, 2006 |
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Your writing is pedestrian, but solid; you at least seem to know the rules of the craft, and have made some effort to hold to them. A little better editing would be good, as I noted several spelling errors.
Try using more descriptors, and invest in a thesaurus; how you say something is often more important than what you say, particularly in erotic fiction. (5/10)
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