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Penny\'s Cage. Author: jan311648
(Added on Mar 23, 2006) (This month 56864 readers) (Total 88851 readers)
A young woman is quietly abducted from a suburban street in a provincial town for reasons never explained to her but which become apparent over time. The story begins about eighteen months into her imprisonment.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
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Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: pttwyn (Edit) Rating: May 8, 2011
Well written and detailed. The strangeness of transformation are hard to make seem plausible,I like your handling to make it seem ordinary. (10/10)

Reviewer: trainer81 (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2006
I like animal transformation stories very much. In words this story didn't bore me one second. I plan to read the 2ed chapter shortly. I give A+ for this work. (7/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Apr 7, 2006
This is the first time I have ever been unsure what number rating to give to a story. This was quite an odd read and I am still left wondering what the whole point to the story was. Just the same, it kept my attention in a strangely erotic fashion. Now, I want to know what the whole point to this story was. So, bring on the next chapter! (9/10)

Reviewer: sheilagirl (Edit) Rating: Mar 30, 2006
I sense that this is the only chapter you intended but still I'm hungry for more. I have always loved the humiliation factor myself and you have described it brilliantly here. (9/10)
Replied by: jan311648 (Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
Many thanks for your kind remarks, and you'll be pleased to know that a sequel, set sometime in Penny's future, is almost ready for posting!

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Mar 26, 2006
A very well told and detailed story, leading us through many facets of the character. (9/10)

Reviewer: Sklaventreiber (Edit) Rating: Mar 24, 2006
was very pleased with the story. (8/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2006
This was a very interesting story. I am curious to see where you go with it. The only thing I can complain about is that you do have some typos. (8/10)
Replied by: jan311648 (Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
Sorry about the typos; I write using one file format and then copy to a .rtf format. Msybe some errors are creeping in there.

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2006
need another chapter or 2 to pass real judgement would have been nice also had you not started the story 18 months into her abduction some early preview would have been nice (7/10)
Replied by: sheilagirl (Edit) (Mar 30, 2006)
I thought she handled the flashbacks nicely as a preview of what happened before. It is a technique authors often use and she did it effectively I think. Of course I agree more detail would have been a plus. I would strongly agree if she hadn't flashed back at all.
Replied by: jan311648 (Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
Thanks for your comments, but I chose to begin the story eighteen months into Penny's imprisonment for dramatic effect. It is possible, of course, that a chapter and verse explanation of the actual abduction would turn you on more than it does me!

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