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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
phonixasz
(Edit) |
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Nov 4, 2015 |
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Too short and needs more, but excellent basic story line. Sad no more from this author since 2006 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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May 10, 2006 |
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I love this story! Scat-munching must be so nasty in reality, but in fantasy, the humiliation of it is wonderful.
I enjoyed the dynamic between the two characters- perfectly balanced between mutual caring and total disrespect from him, almost-fear from her. Teira'a stammering did a lot to develop her character.
Lack of paragraph breaks during dialogue was confusing at times; likewise, lack of demarcation of time lapses also made things unclear at some points.
But overall, good job! Write more! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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May 10, 2006 |
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Good story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 9, 2006 |
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it was good story but you need to put codes in so reading have some idea of the theme of the story (7/10)
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