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Lost in translation
Author: SG
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(Added on May 11, 2006)
(This month 54414 readers) (Total 69213 readers) |
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Drunk and competitive, Robin accepts a dare which leaves her bound in a movie theater. From there fate has its fun. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
hotgoth14
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May 25, 2007 |
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this was very fun to read i hope your writemore since im dying to know what happens next. (9/10)
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dandywriter
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Feb 24, 2007 |
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I liked every aspect of it... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bondage_man69
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May 21, 2006 |
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would have liked to see here get fucked in the ass and/or "kidnapped" by the woman and taken to the party. hope you add a conclusion. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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May 15, 2006 |
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You've got some very creative ideas. Good job exploring interactions with various genders as well as singles and couples. Love what you do with the used and unused condoms.
Unfortunately, the lack of proper grammar as well as the use of teenage colloquialisms make the story almost too tedious to read all the way through. I almost gave up at one point.
Clean up the writing, continue the story, and you will have something worth at least an 8. (6/10)
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rainbow001
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May 14, 2006 |
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Very nice start. Hope that you follow through. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sean Malone
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May 12, 2006 |
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An intriguing scenario with lots more potential, but you left us hanging, and it seemed to me that you were holding off from what you really wanted to put into this, which is penetrative anal sex. (8/10)
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