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Tourist trap
Author: Tomatin
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(Added on Aug 14, 2006)
(This month 58730 readers) (Total 83474 readers) |
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Breaking the rules in a foreign country calls for some consequence... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
johnlw77
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Apr 7, 2011 |
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a good story, esp, as mothbrad says, the cruelty of her humiliation. (8/10)
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Mothbrad
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Mar 12, 2007 |
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Good work, a good story and some exciting sections, particularly the humiliation angle, which is less commonly done with such verve and cruelty. (7/10)
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Rhabbi
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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Well written and erotic, worth you time to read. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 21, 2006 |
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A refreshing twist on an often-told tale. Well written and interesting. (8/10)
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Dick the Slaver
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Aug 15, 2006 |
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I loved your stories. When back and read Gina. It is also a great story (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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nicestart, many on the net with a similar line but this one is great (9/10)
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Lee Boudine
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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This plot is the classic American girl in a third world country. Never-the-less Tomatin has written this fast moving story to excite the reader. He is successful in this endeavor. The result is I very much enjoyed reading Tourist Trap. (8/10)
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