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Maid In Bound
Author: YamiNoHikari
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(Added on Jan 4, 2007)
(This month 49443 readers) (Total 60696 readers) |
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Just a short PWP about maid in bondage. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
Perrin
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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This one is intense if brief. My main problem is the language; some more editting would really highlight its qualities. This is a bit fussy, I know, but things like "she woke up from her sleeping" or "those fabric" really jars the reader. It is a good story but little things like that really ruin the experience. (5/10)
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