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The Spanking Triangle
Author: Cherry Picker
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(Added on Feb 11, 2007)
(This month 12113 readers) (Total 20316 readers) |
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3 schoolgirls and a boy discover humilation, TV & spanking in the space of a couple of days |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bolondro4
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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Perhaps a bit too crowded. I'm a non native english speaker and I get a bit lost from the middle of the story onwards (7/10)
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angel{HM}
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Mar 23, 2007 |
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I liked this story, made it more interesting in that, in part it was a real account.
Some things to look out for are spelling and punctuation, especially with dialogue. Also it would be a better read if you wrote the words ten spanks instead of gave her 10 spanks etc...
Apart from that well done. (6/10)
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