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Trained slut
Author: Mike thomson
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(Added on Mar 2, 2007)
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Bob\'s family life changes dramatically when his buddy offers to train his unsuspecting daughter to be a slut |
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| Reviewer:
Masterdarkone2000
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Mar 16, 2007 |
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Great Read.. I would love to see more and see the girl made bred and them have another child that they train to be a slave and see more with the mom and daughter. (10/10)
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bullnuts43
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Mar 7, 2007 |
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Fantastic story, really liked it. Would have liked to have more detail on the piercings for Emily
Thanks
Bullnuts (9/10)
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Jeanne F
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Mar 7, 2007 |
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For a first attempt, it is very well written. The concept is original. I like the idea that arousal plays an equal part in her training. And that her pussy is hairless - showing her to be a natural slut. I'm sure she would have enjoyed more cruelty and more detail - many of her delicious ordeals are summed up so briefly they amount to a tantalizing glimpse, like the doggie thing. So, like others, I can only say - more! (8/10)
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{pammy}C
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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i really enjoyed reading this.. hope to see more in the future (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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Formatting issues aside, it is not a bad story--or least part one is not bad. I missed the "incest" code so I stopped reading when the mother entered the picture. But I did enjoy the girl's training...even though she seemed like she enjoyed it way too much! (7/10)
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woolfighter
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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Very nice, I just would like to read more about their public humiliation. (9/10)
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Snark
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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Nicely done, especially for a first time. Continuity needs a bit of work, with conflicting descriptions of the progression of events, plus an imagination that must be on steroids to consider changes that radical that fast! While cuckoldry, even with participation, and incest neither being one of my preferences, the presentation and description was interesting enough to keep reading. A little editing from a cold perspective might be sufficient to garner a higher score. Please continue. (8/10)
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slutsteph
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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ok, so the author is new to bdsmlibrary.com and had posting problems...the story was imaginative and different enough, and this girl thinks the author should keep writing. please repost the first part, cleaning up the font and highlighting. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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trying to figure out what fonts style you used and also trying to determine why 1/2 of page 1 is highlighted in blue it was hard to read (5/10)
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