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Temple of Torture
Author: Venom
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(Added on May 6, 2007)
(This month 113659 readers) (Total 165577 readers) |
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After some initial pain-play, the real interrogation and punishment of a slavegirl starts, including a number of very extreme tortures. |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Apr 22, 2016 |
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Good imagination, thanks for the hot torture. Pain sluts should be punished in all extreme ways. (8/10)
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AndreaDawne
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Nov 3, 2008 |
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Wow.... now I know what you mean about the warning you gave me.
That is the worse torture I ever came across in stories.
Very extreme and good story. (7/10)
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Deathnote
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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Gruesome... but an interesting read. Nicely written! ^_^ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Jun 1, 2007 |
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A bit extreme for my taste, but descriptions are interesting. I read this story after having read Venom's recent Nazi Hell story which shows improved sensetivity to the pain of the victim. It is the pain, not physical injury, which makes a story. (7/10)
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susankarl
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May 13, 2007 |
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What a deliciously cruel mistress.
I love the use of the red hot spiked intruder.
My heroines victims tend to die from their awful experiences, as, no doubt, should yours.
I wonder why they live to face another day?
Perhaps you are sentimental, after all !
Seriously, though, I like your novel and ingenious tortures and the extreme cruelty of your sadistic mistress. Keep up the good work.
Susan. (8/10)
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chksng19
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May 11, 2007 |
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Yup, lots of people said it so I'll just nail it down real carefully so it won't slip away again: you need an editor to fix the hundreds of grammatical, spelling, and word usage errors. There, now. Done.
The story itself was evil, cruel, extreme, and wonderful. More tales from the Temple will please a lot of folks looking for extreme. Please consider writing a sequel. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Venom
(Edit) (May 31, 2007)
- To my spelling: in the meantime I've posted a formally revised version without any changes in content.
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Trainstation
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May 10, 2007 |
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The story itself is better than just an ok. The word usage is very poor and really hurts the story. A lot more could have been done with the characters. They came in went in a haphazard way and made for a poor tansition. This could be the start of a really good story with spell check, and better word usage. The author certainly has an imagination. (5/10)
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Book of Evils
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May 8, 2007 |
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Excellent original ideas with good insights into realistic reactions. Lines like "But She didnīt get a response, not to mention an answer." ring right on true. Your content approaches some of the cruelties of my own stories so naturally I enjoyed it. Will certainly read the next installment and review it. (8/10)
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Mothbrad
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May 7, 2007 |
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In terms of inventiveness and cruelty (highly valued attributes for me), this story is a winner. The occasional lapses of language don't take too much away, but perhaps a proof reader would bring the standard up to publishable level. I like the interrogation aspect of the story, as well as the two female victims, which could certainly be expanded in future chapters. (8/10)
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Crowheart
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May 7, 2007 |
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I agree: a good start.
A really extreme story... but the domme is a really interesting person.
I'd really like to read more from you. (7/10)
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ultimatesubbie
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May 6, 2007 |
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good story line although the language itself was a bit off track so it made it difficult to follow in places
good start though! (6/10)
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